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Monday, August 17, 2020

THE Monster

No one believes me They think I'm lying but it's really true.  I hate the big hairy monster living under my bed and I can prove it.  He is hairy like a sheep dog. And he is ugly. And dumb. And stupid.

The monster is trying to fit under my bed. I hear a monster bumping has head on the bed.

He has long  grey fur has long fingers.

He has big teeth longer than a elephants tusks.The monster under my bed I have touched his teeth,
he smells like old rotten fruit.

I ask the monster if he wants to eat five coconuts and he said yes.


6 comments:

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  2. Hi Kaiden, I Really Like How You Described The Monster, Maybe Next Time Check With A Teacher If Theres Spelling Errors!! :3

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  3. Hi kaiden. I really like your monster it must never brush its teeth. What kind of fruit does it eat. What kind of monster is it. Did it get set on fire by a dragon or by Godzilla. Anyways bye I hope you make another monster blog bye bye kaiden seymure

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  4. hi Kaiden I like ure story keep it 😛

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  5. how sharp were his teeth

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